Friday, 18 February 2011

1st draft of script

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Location
Video
Audio
Street

JAKE COLLINS, 14, wearing scruffy shoes, slowly walks down the road scuffing his feet along the pavement.
Jake, starts to lazily kick an empty can of drink down the road.
He continues to walk down the road, but pauses as he comes towards the gate of a house. 


The sound of footsteps on the pavement and feet scraping on the floor. Cars driving past.

 Sound of can scraping along the floor, and footsteps on the pavement.
Feet scraping, feet stopping.
Path
Jake looks up at the house and releases a sigh as he opens the gate. 

Jake looks up at the house and releases a sigh as he opens the gate. 

Jake walks a faster pace down the path, still scuffing his feet along the floor. He reaches into his bag and pulls a small set of keys, puts them in the lock and enters the house
Low pitched sigh.
Gate swinging open and closing. 
Feet scraping along the floor.
Sound of things in his bag, rummaging through his bag.
Keys scraping the lock.
Taking out keys.
Door slamming.
House
Jake enters his house and flicks off his shoes.

He throws his bag down into the corner.

He looks down at the floor.

Jake slowly drags his feet across hallway.

He swings round into the kitchen and walks over to the cupboard and  grabs a glass.

He reaches out and runs the tap.

He turns on the tap and runs the water into the glass.

Jake takes a sip of water.

He rinks the rest of the glass.


Jake turns around and runs up the stairs to his bedroom.

He slams the door and runs over to his computer and turns it on.

He swings around on his chair, then types on the keyboard.

He jumps and takes off his tie.


He pauses, then opens the door.

Jakes Brother, Dan Collins, 18
Stands there, as the start to talk for a few seconds.

Jakes father grabs him and shakes him.

Jake is thrown to the floor as he father slams the door.

He marches over to his computer chair and types angrily.

He clicks on the friends icon of a website he is using. 

Jake clicks back on the homepage of the site and see’s updates from friends.

He clicks on a certain profile and types a message.

He continues clicking and typing on certain profiles of the website.

He pauses and turns around to look out the window.

Jake looks back around to the computer. Icons on the screen catch his eye.

The phone to the left side of Jake on the table buzzes.

Jake looks at the phone and tightens his grip on the phone.

He Throws the phone across the room.

His bedroom door swings open.



Shoes hitting the floor.


Bag hitting floor
Dad: “Why are you so late?”


Feet dragging across floor.



Glass hitting the counter.



Water running

Water running into the glass.


Drinking water.

Drinking water


Foot steps running up the stairs.  

Door slamming.
Feet Running.

Chair swinging. (Music starts)
Typing.

Sound of jumping.
Scuffling his school shirt.
Loud Knocking at the door
The door opening. 

Music plays.



Music continues to play.


Music fades quieter.


Foot steps.
Loud typing on the keys.

Mouse clicking.
Typing.

Mouse clicking.
Typing.


Clicking.
Typing.

Clicking.
Typing.

Chair swinging.


Chari swinging.
Hitting desk.


Phone vibrating.


Picking up the phone.


Phone hitting/landing on the floor.

Door opening.




Rory Duncan AS Media.

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