Location | Video | Audio | |
Street | JAKE COLLINS, 14,wearing scruffy shoes, slowly walks down the road scuffing his feet. Jake starts to lazily kick an empty drink can along the pavement. He pauses as he arrives at the gate of a house. | Footsteps on pavement, feet scraping the pavement. Cars passing. Sound of can grating on the pavement, and footsteps. | |
Path | Jake looks up at the house. Jake walks quickly down the path, still scuffing his feet. He reaches into his bag and pulls out keys, puts them in the lock and enters the house. | Low pitched sigh. Gate swinging squeaking on hinges. Feet scraping along the path. Clanking of keys. Keys clinking the lock. Door slamming. | |
House: Hallway | Jake enters his house and flicks off his shoes. He throws his bag down into the corner. He looks down at the floor. Jake slowly drags his feet across hallway. | Shoes hitting the floor. Bag hitting floor Brother: (yells) “Why are you so late?” Feet dragging across floor. | |
Kitchen | He swings round into the kitchen and walks over to the cupboard and grabs a glass. Jake puts the glass on the counter. He turns on the tap and fills the glass. Jake drinks the water. | Glass hitting the counter. Water running Water filling glass. Gulps | |
Hallway Bedroom | Jake turns around walks quickly out of the kitchen. He quickly walks up stairs to his bedroom. He slams the door and runs over to his computer and turns it on. He swings around on his chair, then types on the keyboard. He jumps up and takes off his tie. He pauses, then opens the door. Jake’s Brother DAN COLLINS, 17, with many piercings and wearing a scruffy jumper and torn jeans, is on the other side of the door. His Brother points at him with a sharp tone. Jakes Brother grabs him and him and throws him into the wall. Dan walks out of the room. Jake marches over to his computer chair and types angrily. He clicks on the friend’s icon of a website he is using. Jake clicks back on the homepage of the site and see’s updates from friends. He clicks on a certain profile and types a message. He continues clicking and typing on certain profiles of the website. He pauses and turns around to look out the window. Jake looks back around to the computer. Icons on the screen catch his eye. The phone to the left side of Jake on the table buzzes. Jake looks at the phone and picks it up, tightening his grip around the phone. He Throws the phone across the room. His bedroom door swings open. | Foot steps running up the stairs. Footsteps Door slamming. Feet Running. Chair swinging. (Music starts/Fades in) Typing. Thuds Ruffling of clothings Loud knock on the door The door opening. Dan: “Why are you always so noisy?” Jake: “ I’m sorry I didn’t mean really didn’t mean to Dan” Dan:“I’ve had enough of you enough lately” Music continues to play. Music fades quieter. Foot steps. Loud typing on the keys. Mouse clicking. Typing. Mouse clicking. Typing. Clicking. Typing. Clicking. Typing. Chair swinging. Chair swinging. Hitting desk. Phone vibrating. Picking up the phone. Phone hitting/landing on the floor. Door opening. Rory Duncan AS Media. | |
Friday, 18 February 2011
3rd draft of script
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