Friday, 18 February 2011

2nd draft of script

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Location
Video
Audio
Street

JAKE COLLINS, 14,wearing scruffy shoes, slowly walks down the road scuffing his feet.
Jake starts to lazily kick an empty drink can along the pavement.
He pauses as he arrives at the gate of a house.

Footsteps, pavement, feet scraping on the floor. Cars passing.
Sound of can scraping along the floor, and footsteps on the pavement.
Feet scraping, feet stopping.
Path

Jake looks up at the house and releases a sigh as he opens the gate. 

Jake walks quickly down the path, still scuffing his feet. He reaches into his bag and pulls a small set of keys, puts them in the lock and enters the house.
Low pitched sigh.
Gate swinging open and closing. 
Feet scraping along the path.
Clanking of keys.
Keys scraping the lock.
Taking out keys.
Door slamming.
House
Jake enters his house and flicks off his shoes.

He throws his bag down into the corner.

He looks down at the floor.

Jake slowly drags his feet across hallway.

He swings round into the kitchen and walks over to the cupboard and  grabs a glass.

He turns on the tap and fills the glass.




Jake drinks the water.


Shoes hitting the floor.


Bag hitting floor
Brother: (yells) “Why are you so late?”


Feet dragging across floor.



Glass hitting the counter.



Water running

Water running into the glass.


Drinking water.


Stairs




Bedroom
Jake turns around walks quickly out of the kitchen, up stairs to his bedroom.

He slams the door and runs over to his computer and turns it on.

He swings around on his chair, then types on the keyboard.

He jumps up and takes off his tie.



He pauses, then opens the door.

Jake’s Brother  DAN COLLINS, 17, is on the other side of the door.
His Brother points at him with a sharp tone.





Jakes father grabs him and shakes him and throws him to the floor.

Jake marches over to his computer chair and types angrily.

He clicks on the friend’s icon of a website he is using. 

Jake clicks back on the homepage of the site and see’s updates from friends.

He clicks on a certain profile and types a message.

He continues clicking and typing on certain profiles of the website.

He pauses and turns around to look out the window.

Jake looks back around to the computer. Icons on the screen catch his eye.

The phone to the left side of Jake on the table buzzes.

Jake looks at the phone and tightens his grip on the phone.

He Throws the phone across the room.

His bedroom door swings open.



Foot steps running up the stairs.  


Door slamming.
Feet Running.

Chair swinging. (Music starts/Fades in)
Typing.

Sound of jumping.
Scuffling his school shirt.

Loud knock on the door


The door opening. 

Rob: “Why are you always so noisy?”

Jake: “ I’m sorry I didn’t mean really didn’t mean to Dan”

“I’ve had enough of you enough lately”


Music continues to play.


Music fades quieter.


Foot steps.
Loud typing on the keys.

Mouse clicking.
Typing.

Mouse clicking.
Typing.


Clicking.
Typing.

Clicking.
Typing.

Chair swinging.


Chair swinging.
Hitting desk.


Phone vibrating.


Picking up the phone.


Phone hitting/landing on the floor.

Door opening.




Rory Duncan AS Media.

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